Posted by jacobnbds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on March 5, 2014
I hope you enjoy my paint roller snowman and also hope you enjoy my snowman story.
One cold winter day Jake was bored. He did not know what to do. Then Jake had a great idea. Jake ran to the closet got his snowpants, coat, toque, and mittens on. Jake was very excited. He was going to the park to build . Jake ran as fast as he could to get to the park. Jake made a snowman. He just made a snowball and rolled it until it a snowmanwas a huge snowball. Then he made the second biggest snowball. Then he made the smallest snowball. Jake stacked the snowballs. Jake realized he forgot to bring supplies to put on the snowman. Jake quickly ran home to get coal for the eyes and mouth, and a carrot for the nose. When he came back the snowman was still there. Jake stuck the nose in the middle and the five pieces of coal for the mouth and eyes. Jake looked around for some sticks for his snowman. Jake looked back at his snowman. To Jakes’ surprise his snowman was dancing around.
Jake replied, “Come on let’s go home and have a snowball fight. After the snowball fight they built a tunnel out of snow with a bed that the snowman could sleep on. Jake decided to give his snowman name. “Is it alright if I name you Pete,” asked Jake. “Yes,” replied Pete. “Good night,” replied Jake. The snowman replied, “Good night as well.” The next morning Jake woke up early because he had to go to the eye doctor. When he came back his snowman had melted away because the sun had come out. Jake was sad but he could build another snowman when it snowed again.
Keep Up the great work! Maybe you could add a few more details about building the tunnel. 🙂
Nice job, Jacob! You did a nice job adding details to the begin of your story explaining how Jake built Pete and how he came to life by dancing around. I like the snowball fight and the tunnel Jake built for Pete, however, you could have added more details to these activities to make them more interesting. I would have liked to see one more activity that Jake did with Pete. It was great that you explained how Pete melted because of the weather. Keep working hard! 🙂
Grade Fours and Miss Vidotto,
Again, you have outdone yourselves! I very much enjoyed your snowman stories and also reading about all the interesting things you are doing at school.
I also enjoyed teaching you Music this week. Playing the different instruments was fun. By the way, who DID steal the cookie from the Cookie Jar??
🙂 Mrs. Ressler
We are glad you enjoyed our writing! Thank you for teaching us Music. We enjoyed playing the different instruments. We think you were the one who stole the cookie from the Cookie Jar! Thanks for taking the time to read our blog! Have a fantastic weekend! 🙂
Ummm…well…Grade Fours, I was a little bit hungry and needed a snack…um; next time I won’t sneak that cookie!! I’ll see you on Monday for Music!
🙂 Mrs. Ressler