Posted by hermantbds4 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on March 5, 2014
I hope you enjoy my story and my paint rollor snowman!:)
One snowy winter Herman was bored and there was no school because it was a snow day. He thought and he thought what to do. Finally he had an idea. He decided to build a snowman. He went outside and made three different sized snowballs. One was large, one was medium, and one was small. Herman put all of the snowballs on top of each other. He went inside and found a carrot for his nose, buttons, hat, and scarf. He went back outside and found two sticks for the arms. Herman put all of the pieces on the snowman. As he put the last item on to the snowman the hat, “POOF,” the snowman came to life.
Herman was surprised because he had never believed the story of a snowman coming to life. Herman called the snowman Henry. Henry replied, “Let’s play freeze tag.” Herman and Henry went to the backyard and Henry was it for freeze tag. Henry ran as fast as he could, finally Henry caught Herman. Herman ran after Henry.
After a while Henry and Herman felt like playing a different game so they plunked down on the snow to decide what game they should play. Herman replied, “I know what game we should play. Let’s have a snowball fight. Herman and Henry made a fort to protect them they made some snowballs and threw them at each other. When they ran out of snowballs they made more and kept throwing snowballs.
Soon both got tired of having a snowball fight, Henry suggested going to the park to play grounders. Herman thought that was a great idea and the park was a great place to play.
They raced to the park. Herman beat Henry to the park. Henry and Herman played grounders. This time Henry was it. Henry ran after Herman but Henry was not as fast as Herman because he had a big ball for legs.
Henry and Herman wanted to do something else so they thought about what to play. Herman replied, “I know what we should do. We should climb up a tall hill and slide off of it.” Henry replied, “Yeah let’s go.” So they found a big hill and climbed up it. When they got on top of the hill Henry replied, “You go first Herman.” “Okay,” replied Herman. So Herman slid down the hill and when he got to the bottom of the hill he screamed to Henry, “Now you go!” “Okay,” replied Henry. So Henry slid down and screamed, “WAAHOOOOOOOOOO.” Henry flew in the air with glee and happiness. When he got to the ground Henry replied, “That was awsesome.”
Herman wanted to go home, but Henry replied, “Sorry I can’t. I have to go back to my family.” Herman replied, “I understand. Well I better get going,” Henry replied. “Wait,” Herman replied, “Can we just play one more game of toilet tag.” Henry replied, “Okay.” Herman was it and tried to tag Henry. Whoever was caught first they would be out of the game. Herman finally creplied, “Good bye.” Herman replied, “Good bye. aught Henry and he was out. Henry replied, “Well it’s time for me to go.” Henry It was great to play with you!”
The End
I like the font colour you used and also all the quotation marks. I like the word WAAOOOOOOOOOO. 🙂
Great job, Herman! I like how you used the word, “POOF,” at the beginning of the story to show that the snowman came to life. Herman and Henry played some interesting activities such as freeze tag, having a snowball fight, and playing grounders. I like how you added to detail to some of the activities Herman and Henry did, such as making a snow fort as protection from the snowball fight. Really work on limiting the amount of conversation you have in your next writing project. I liked the ending of your story that Henry had to go back to his family. Very creative, rather than melting. Keep up the hard and nice work! 🙂