Posted by peterb1516 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on November 29, 2015

Glimmering blue sky,

clouds as white as winter snow.

Birds fly through the sky.bird

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Great work, Peter! You followed the syllable pattern of a Haiku poem. I liked that you kept your ideas with the same theme – the sky. Excellent use of adjectives such as glimmering and white as winter snow. Using such description helps the reader create an image in their mind. Keep up the fantastic work, Peter! 🙂

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