Good work, Eva! You followed the correct syllable pattern for a Haiku poem. I like how you kept your ideas with the same theme – leaves. I like how you included a descriptive adjective – swirling. Nice selection of pictures to depict your poem. Keep working on adding more descriptive adjectives to your writing. This will help the reader visualize what you are describing in their mind. Keep working hard, Eva! 🙂
Good work, Eva! You followed the correct syllable pattern for a Haiku poem. I like how you kept your ideas with the same theme – leaves. I like how you included a descriptive adjective – swirling. Nice selection of pictures to depict your poem. Keep working on adding more descriptive adjectives to your writing. This will help the reader visualize what you are describing in their mind. Keep working hard, Eva! 🙂