Autumn

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Posted by abramf1516 | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on December 3, 2015

Leaves falling from trees,

raking up piles of leaves.

Winter is coming.

leaves

path

Comments (1)

Good work, Abram! You followed the syllable pattern for a Haiku. You kept your ideas with the same theme – leaves. Continue working on adding descriptive adjectives to your writing. This will allow your writing to be more interesting. Nice selection of pictures to go with your leaf theme. Keep working hard, Abram! 🙂

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