Great work, Dylan! Your poem followed the correct syllable pattern for a Haiku. I like how you kept your ideas with the same theme: leaves. I like how you included shadows, which is something we discussed in Science! The reader can imagine leave turning colour and children jumping in the leaves. Great picture too! Keep working hard! 🙂
Great work, Dylan! Your poem followed the correct syllable pattern for a Haiku. I like how you kept your ideas with the same theme: leaves. I like how you included shadows, which is something we discussed in Science! The reader can imagine leave turning colour and children jumping in the leaves. Great picture too! Keep working hard! 🙂