Good work, Peter! I like how your front cover showcased the tree in winter and tree in summer. A creative idea to let the reader know what your poem is about. Your poem followed the diamante format. You used nouns, verbs, and adjectives according to each line correctly. Your adjectives, nouns, and verbs described both seasons well. This allows the reader to understand what seasons you were discussing. Shovelling is a great verb to describe winter, but my least favourite activity to do in winter! I would much rather build sandcastles and play with a beach ball in the summer! Great job with your pictures as they showcased summer and winter well. Nice job reading your poem clearly. Looking forward to reading your snow globe writing project. Keep working hard! 🙂
Good work, Peter! I like how your front cover showcased the tree in winter and tree in summer. A creative idea to let the reader know what your poem is about. Your poem followed the diamante format. You used nouns, verbs, and adjectives according to each line correctly. Your adjectives, nouns, and verbs described both seasons well. This allows the reader to understand what seasons you were discussing. Shovelling is a great verb to describe winter, but my least favourite activity to do in winter! I would much rather build sandcastles and play with a beach ball in the summer! Great job with your pictures as they showcased summer and winter well. Nice job reading your poem clearly. Looking forward to reading your snow globe writing project. Keep working hard! 🙂