Good work, David! Your poem followed the diamante format. You used nouns, verbs, and adjectives according to each line correctly. Your adjectives, nouns, and verbs described both seasons well. I wish you used a different verb than playing to describe summer, as it is not a strong verb. Ice storm and ice fishing were creative ideas to describe winter. Great job with your pictures as they showcased summer and winter well. Nice job reading your poem clearly. Looking forward to reading your snow globe writing project. Keep working hard! 🙂
Good work, David! Your poem followed the diamante format. You used nouns, verbs, and adjectives according to each line correctly. Your adjectives, nouns, and verbs described both seasons well. I wish you used a different verb than playing to describe summer, as it is not a strong verb. Ice storm and ice fishing were creative ideas to describe winter. Great job with your pictures as they showcased summer and winter well. Nice job reading your poem clearly. Looking forward to reading your snow globe writing project. Keep working hard! 🙂