Good work, Dylan! Your cinquain poem followed the correct syllable pattern. I like how you stayed with the same theme of describing Cupid. This allows your poem to flow well. Your poem describes Cupid well, as flies around with his tiny feathers by shooting arrows to spread happiness. I look forward to reading your snow globe story. Keep working hard! 🙂
Good work, Dylan! Your cinquain poem followed the correct syllable pattern. I like how you stayed with the same theme of describing Cupid. This allows your poem to flow well. Your poem describes Cupid well, as flies around with his tiny feathers by shooting arrows to spread happiness. I look forward to reading your snow globe story. Keep working hard! 🙂