The Case of the Missing Brown Football


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on September 27, 2016

Take a look at the exciting mystery story written using the Book Creator App.

Comments (1)

Great work, Aaron! Your mystery fill in the blank story used descriptive adjectives such as, “warm, amazing, brown football, and quickly,” which make your story interesting. Your mystery story followed a logical sequence of events in order to solve the case of the missing brown football. It was a creative idea to have brown and white skid marks on the floor. I like how you described the size of the computer room and the colour of the desk. Continue adding details like this to your next writing project. You read your story clearly and with expression. Nice work using the Book Creator App for the first time. Your font colour was easy to read and your pictures related well to your story. Fantastic work and keep working hard! 🙂

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