The Case of the Missing Colourful Paint Set


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on September 27, 2016

Take a look at the exciting mystery story written using the Book Creator App.

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Good work, Anna! Your fill in the blank mystery story had descriptive adjectives such as, “sunny, exciting, and colourful.” Adding descriptive language to your story makes your story more interesting. Your story followed a logical sequence of events in order to solve the case of the missing colourful paint set. I like how you forgot you left the colourful paint set in the bathroom under a pink towel after cleaning up. Deciding to paint another picture with your colourful paint set after you found it, shows the reader you really do love your colourful paint set! You read your story clearly and with expression. Fantastic job using the Book Creator App for the first time. Your font colour was easy to read and your pictures related well to your story. Fantastic job and keep working hard! 🙂

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