The Case of the Missing Dog Called Blue Jay


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on September 27, 2016

Take a look at the exciting mystery story written using the Book Creator App.

Comments (2)

Great work, David! Your fill in the blank mystery story used descriptive adjectives such as, “sunny, great, and brown and black dog,” help make your story more interesting. Very creative idea to name your dog Blue Jay and it is nice that you enjoy playing fetch and taking Blue Jay for walks. Your story followed a logical sequence of events in order to solve the case of the mystery dog, Blue Jay. I like how you described the colour of the doghouse and garbage can and explained that the blue sofa cushions were comfortable. Adding these details to your story helps make it more interesting and this is something you need to continue for your next writing project. I hope the dog didn’t get muddy footprints on the comfortable blue sofa cushions! Your read your story clearly and with expression. Fantastic job using the Book Creator App for the first time. Your font colour was easy to read and your pictures related well to your mystery story. Keep up the terrific work and keep working hard! 🙂

Hello, I like that you wrote about your dog and when he was missing. I wish that you put how your dog got to be missing. I wonder if you have more than 1 dog.

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