The Easter Bunny is Missing


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on April 30, 2019

Take a look at the mystery story called, “The Easter Bunny is Missing,” created by Helena using, “Book Creator.” Enjoy!  🙂

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Excellent job, Helena! You understand a story has a beginning, middle, and an end. You included transition words with each new idea to signal to the reader that a new event was about to take place. Your story idea was creative and I am glad Foxy the Fox found the Easter Bunny at the chocolate factory. You included descriptive adjectives in your story which makes it more interesting to the reader. Fantastic job reading your story fluently, accurately, and with expression. You pictures related well to your story and your font selection and colour choices, as well as, your background selections made your story easy to read. Your writing has improved tremendously since the beginning of the year! Proud of you, Helena! Keep working hard and fantastic job on your Easter story! 🙂

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