The Easter Bunny is Missing


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on April 30, 2019

Take a look at the mystery story called, “The Easter Bunny is Missing,” created by David using, “Book Creator.” Enjoy!  🙂

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Great job, David! You understand a story needs a beginning, middle, and an end. You included transition words to signal to the reader that a new event was about to take place. Your story idea was creative about the Easter Bunny being on vacation on Hawaii! I am sure he needed a break before the big day of delivering all of those Easter eggs to the children! Keep working on adding more detail and descriptive adjectives to your writing to make it more easier. You read your story fluently, accurately, and expression. Your font selection and colours, as well as, your background selections made your story easy to read. Your pictures related well to your story. Your writing has shown improvement since the beginning of the year. Proud of you David! Keep working hard and great job on your Easter story! 🙂

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