The Easter Bunny is Missing


Posted by Michelle Vidotto | Posted in Language Arts | Posted on April 30, 2019

Take a look at the mystery story called, “The Easter Bunny is Missing,” created by Jairo using, “Book Creator.” Enjoy!  🙂


Comments (1)

Excellent job, Jairo! You understand a story needs a beginning, middle, and an end. You included transition words to signal to the reader that a new event was about to take place. Be sure you are consistent with your punctuation and capitalization for your next writing piece. I like how you went back and added detail to your paragraphs after you received suggestions from me. I am happy that the Easter Bunny was found and it was nice he spent some time in Hawaii before hiding all of those eggs for the children. You read your story fluently, accurately, and with expression. Your font selections and colours, as well as, your background selections made your story easy to read. Your pictures related well to your story. Your writing has shown tremendous improvement since the beginning of the year! Proud of you, Jairo! Keep working hard and terrific job on your Easter story! 🙂

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